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Saying Good Bye (replies greatly appreciated!)
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Saying Good Bye (replies greatly appreciated!) |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Saying Good-Bye  Trying to keep myself busy I wonder-do you even miss me? You broke my heart-do you even care? Please some back my little Teddy Bear My heart is empty and my sould is cold When I first met you I htought you had broken the mold All you do is sit and loaugh at my sorrow My heart was all that you wanted to borrow You dragged it through the mud then took it and ran I was foolish to actually think you were a real man You slept with me? Funny, I don't remember that You lied and all you have now is your stupid cat I've decided to move on my dear I'll shed just one more tear Don't tell mme that you love me that's not what I want to hear I'm taking my heart back, getting the hell out of here You thought you could play with my heart You planned it from the very start But I figured it out your petty stupid game Guess, you'll just always be the same Get over yourself you ignorant little fool You took my heart and broke every rule I'm getting on with my life You were the cause of all my strife So how does it feel to be all alone? Don't be calling me on the phone I blocked your number, you can't get through How do you feel now? Are you cold and blue? I hope you are, I hope you feel the way I did My broken heart and I always hid Hid behind a mask of smiles and pride But inside I really already died See, look I'm so over you My revenge is way past due I can't keep it in any more It was locked deep down inside my core Burning desires deep within It definately had to be a sin You changed my world in more ways than one For a wonderful while I was your "sweetie" and your "hun" But now I'm nothing because you think I'm dumb Now, with your stupid childish games I am done I'm writing this to finally for one last time say good-bye On last thing before I go--please don't make any more girls cry ~*~Dedicated to moving on with my life and getting rid of a fool that I thought I loved~*~ "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Jess, Now that I finally got to read the poem...I think it's the best one of your's I've heard yet. Chat with ya later, hun.... Jeremy |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Star I guess we're always looking for something elusive...trying hard to make one believe..when mockery of feelings is on stark display...don't try hard..if its there it's meant to be otherwise just let it go..never cry be bold...you'll find yours. Sincerely A_L |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you are a very strong person...good for ya maybe you could tell me how you do it  this is a really lovely poem, a little spell check might help, but i agree that this is the best one so far. looking forward to reading more of your poems thanks for sharing them |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
ive been reading alot of posts and replies going on between StarPrincess and ur friend (forgot screenname) and im real sorry that that sleezy guy (chris i think his name was) cought you in his stupid game, but i hope you dont hold a grudge aginst all guys, bcuz ive heard of people who get hurt like that and they never recover, the never trust, never love, never get close to anyone again, i just want to say that even though some guys can be totan A$$es, we arent all that bad! hehe |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey you guys! thanks for your replies!!!  Jeremy~sorry that it took so much work! LOL. thxs for making me feel better~  Love ya lots!A_L~thxs for your advice! Acire~  well thanks,but I beg to differ. I'm not as strong as I would like to think! Had I been I would've been able to resist the urge to incessantly come back to him. but I'm doing my best now...CLB~ what can I say? you made me feel a lot better about the male population. LoL. hey you wanna marry me? J/K!!! thxs for the kind words and inspiration! Love you all!! Love Always~*~Jess~*~ oh and p.s. sorry about the spelling! It was pretty difficult trying to type and keep my four year old brother on task. lol. hope you all forgive me. "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Jess, I relate well to this poem and it reminds me alot of myself. Question is, (hopefully this won't offend you) if you're so over him then why do you write poems about him? Anywho, I really like this poem. Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
that is one of the best poems that i have ever read. i give you mad props for that. i know exactly how you feel. i fell in love with a guy for what to get played like a fool. all i did was cry but then the emotions changed. i gave up the fact that he lost something that was good. but for me it was good while it lasted and its over now. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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