Teen Poetry #2 |
No Matter |
Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Before you even read this, I'm making it clear that I did not write this. It was written by a friend of mine named Katie Reed. (I made title though) No Matter Sitting here waiting... wondering why. Sobbing and crying... wondering why you left my heart so cold and blue. Just always know that I'll love you. My first real love, and always will be. I'm begging you please to come back to me. You promised we would always be together forever...eternally. Looking back on the memories we shared. You always told me that you cared. I'll wait for you for the rest of my life no matter the pain, the grief, or the strife. Katie Reed 5/12/00 |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a great poem, tell your friend she has a wonderful talent and she should keep on writeing. |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
to katie: this is a nice poem, it tells bout people breaking up, yet you feel no hard feelings, something kinda different in this day and age, a good poem, keep writing and maybe you could start posting on your own, it would be nice to hear some more poems from you always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
mad props to Jeremy's crew! LoL j/p. this is a wonderful poem. and I hope that Katie will be posting soon. she has a unique writing style. very similar to my feelings as of this very second. tell her to keep it up. Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
very beautiful and Katie will defnitely find her matie! Sincerely A_L |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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