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Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-06-08 03:56 AM

Before you even read this, I'm making it clear that I did not write this.  It was written by a friend of mine named Katie Reed. (I made title though)

No Matter

Sitting here waiting...
wondering why.
Sobbing and crying...
wondering why
you left my heart
so cold and blue.
Just always know
that I'll love you.
My first real love,
and always will be.
I'm begging you please
to come back to me.
You promised we would
always be
together forever...eternally.
Looking back
on the memories we shared.
You always told me
that you cared.
I'll wait for you
for the rest of my life
no matter the pain,
the grief, or the strife.

Katie Reed  5/12/00


© Copyright 2000 Jeremy D. Halstead - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
1 posted 2000-06-08 02:13 PM

This is a great poem, tell your friend she has a wonderful talent and she should keep on writeing.
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA
2 posted 2000-06-08 03:08 PM

to katie:
this is a nice poem, it tells bout people breaking up, yet you feel no hard feelings, something kinda different in this day and age, a good poem, keep writing and maybe you could start posting on your own, it would be nice to hear some more poems from you

 always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :)

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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
3 posted 2000-06-08 04:03 PM

mad props to Jeremy's crew! LoL j/p. this is a wonderful poem. and I hope that Katie will be posting soon. she has a unique writing style. very similar to my feelings as of this very second. tell her to keep it up. Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
4 posted 2000-06-09 10:32 AM

very beautiful and Katie will defnitely find her matie!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-15 07:07 PM



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