Teen Poetry #2 |
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Realized Too Late |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
As I think of you and close my eyes Someone please hold me tight Tell me that I'm just dreaming Because it hurts me deep inside I'd like you to feel how I miss you so much How I miss your warm, caring, and gentle touch Your cute little face in my mind Your soft and innocent lips touching mine I miss running my fingers thru your hair The feeling in my heart knowing you did care I miss the limited times we spent with each other How I wanted it to last and be with you forever That sharp but mysterious look in your eyes You look so cute when you bite your lower lip as you smile That devlish grin that shows as you stare right at me I miss you so much, alone in the dark, feeling so lonely You're the only one I've always wanted A fool, I am, I took you for granted Now here I am, holding on to the memories Left only with hope slowly drowning in my own tears Now I realize how much you really mean to me I miss you so much, that I want you to see Why only now, I don't know, I must have been blind My broken heart is in your hands, please be kind All I can say is, "I'm sorry, please forgive me" It may not be enough, but I don't know what else to do I"m not asking you for one last chance Baby, all I want you to know is that "I Love You" |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
It's a problem we all have, realize only what we had when it's gone. This poem is lovely, I hope you gave it to her. Good luck. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i did give it to her, but i never got a reaction back i guess it was too late |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
WOW~!!! this is so incredible! YOu always have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself, and you get the point through quite directly. It's incredible!!! But when it's to late, you know it is then not meant to be and something better will come along. Keep up the wonderful work!!! With love, Micale. |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Mickel295 thanks for you generous review I'm glad that someone appreciates my poems the way you do. thanks again |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Aww, well B, this is very sad. ![]() I realized I hadn't replied to a lot of your old stuff so here I am. I hope the regret has subsided. Are you gonna write for us ever again? ![]() Jenn "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aww Acire, man this is so sad. 3 guesses as to who it's about. You've exposed your heart here and bared it all for us to see. I like this because you're really telling it like it and for once, aren't saying you'll get over it. You truly miss this girl and it comes across in this piece. Well done. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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