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StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
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0 posted 2000-06-07 09:24 AM


Have you ever heard angels cry?

It’s what happens when you’ve lost
everything you thought you had.
It’s beyond the feeling of mad and past
the point of sad.
My dear friend, I’ve heard angels cry
And to you I will tell no lie,
It’s the day when all the rain pours down
And when the queen looses her crown
It’s when inside your heartaches
And it’s when you begin to break
All your feelings begin to quickly die
They die when angels cry
You lose your mind, you go insane
And all the world is so mundane

Have you ever seen angels cry?

It’s what happens when all the world begins to lie
It’s what happens when the see you not try
Angels cry when the world loses hope
And when inside you truly can’t cope
When you start to not care
Is when they are there
Watching and waiting for you to find them
Hoping that they aren’t the ones you condemn
The world keeps moving and so do you
But with out you they are soo blue
Don’t lie, don’t cheat, and don’t you steal
Because when angels cry it’s all so real.


© Copyright 2000 Jessica Lynn - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-07 10:30 AM


Hi Star
I see your point. It's a beautiful theme.

Sincerely
A_L

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-06-07 12:07 PM


Ah, that is a very touching poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
3 posted 2000-06-08 03:42 AM


Hey Jess, I really liked the idea behind that one.  very creative.  keep me in suspence.

 

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-06-08 03:55 PM


HeY EvErYoNe! ThAnKs FoR yOuR rEpLiEs! It MeAnS a LoT tO kNoW hOw YoU aLl FeEl AbOuT mY wOrK!! =0) tHiS pOeM iS nOt OnE oF mY bEsT i WaS sOrT oF hAvInG a LiTtLe BiT oF a WrItEr'S bLoCk! LoVe YoU aLl!! LoVe AlWaYs~*~JeSsIcA LyNn~*~
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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5 posted 2007-11-15 07:07 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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