Teen Poetry #2 |
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No Tomorrow |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
I thought I loved you, but I wasn't quite sure, This feeling of incontenment makes all my days a blur. I thought you loved me, but I wasn't quite sure, but you proved you didn't when you went and got another "her". Just when I think we takes two steps forward, I find we've only taken three back. I am going to quit trying, hence my heart is filled with sorrow. One more thing I must say before I go, you must remember, there's no tomorrow. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Well, all can say about the very first line is that if you "think" you love someone, then you don't. It's like getting shot in the ass...if it happens, you don't say "Hey, I 'think' I just got shot in the ass.", you just know. I'm not trying to be a smart ass, sorry if I sound cynical right now. Over all, the peom shows that you have a lot of strength to just say goodbye. Jeremy D. Halstead |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Mickel I know the trauma when you see your love drifitng away and its too painful. But when we quit trying evrything ends up with 'What is ' and thats not a good feeling. Sincerely A_L |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
Thanks for your replies guys, i think you are both right in what you have to say, but to say good-bye is hard, and it's even harder to learn how. Thanks again. Micale |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Cale~ Well, knowing who this poem is about gives it a lot more meaning. I love you so much and just because he can't realize the great person that he is losing, doesn't mean he isn't. He is losing the greatest girl in the world...why? Because you don't deserve his bull! I am so proud of you for saying good bye. Hey when are you coming over so we can go to the pool and watch all the hot guys swim?!!? LoL I love you girl! SISTAHS-4-EVER!! Love 2 Love Ya! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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