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LIL' Lou
Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29
OKlahoma

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:06 PM


Hi everyone i have a dog named Jake and i thought this was kute!!!


If I die before i wake
I pray the lord my soul he'll take

If i die before i wake
Ipray the lord he'll feed Jake



 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

© Copyright 2000 Lauren LOU - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-06-06 02:54 PM


Actually, that is pretty cute.  I guess you love yer dog!!!  

Jeremy Halstead

 

CLBinLOVE
Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA
2 posted 2000-06-06 03:01 PM


hehe short and right to the point, interesting, ur right, it is kinda cute

 always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:)

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