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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-06-06 10:11 AM


It's a wonderful game that we played
Atleast I enjoyed the game
Me showing the maximum of love
You returning it with a sense of doubt
I guess the game ended when you moved to face the next round opponent
You gave a beautiful ending
I guess you're too good at it
You've beaten me in straight sets
I love you lady
I just love the way you played
Your elegance is too good
Your deceptive volleys makes you a sure winner

I guess you knew it from beginning to end
But I thought our love would never end
Still I'm trying to figure out was it all just a game
But now I've become well-versed in it you see

Not that I would play a game
But atleast I would understand if its all just a game

Sincerely
A_L


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Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

1 posted 2000-06-06 03:34 PM


I like this because I can relate. I love the line, "I guess you knew it from the beginning but I thought our love would never end." So true in alot of relationships. I liked this one alot.


Love,
Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

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