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since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2000-06-05 08:58 PM

well, i wrote this because ive been writing love poems all my life, and i wanted to do something different, that still came from the heart
this is one of my biggest fears, put on paper, sorta...
anyway, here it is:

i wish i could understand
howy it feels to be you
i wish that i could know
why you do what you do

when you describe to me your feelings
i try to understand
i try to see why you act and feel
that your worth is that of sand

but all it does is confuse me
and i end up all in knots
and i try all day to figure out
whether i should tell you or not

i dont know if its just me
that thinks your not eating
or am i wrong
am i just not seeing

because to me it seems
that you dont eat enough
but to you it seems
that you can never lose enough

i dont think your fat
i dont think your plump
i think ur perfect
and you i would never dump

so please dont tourture urself
its not worth it
the world wont think differently
if you just lose that last little bit

i telling you this
because im scared
i fear you'll end up in a hospital
or worse, dead

i hope u can help me
i hope you can ease my fears
because right now im so scared
all i see is tears

please stop this
for me?

 always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:)

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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
1 posted 2000-06-05 09:04 PM

WOW! you have a wonderful way of expressing your fears, but your love at the same time!I'm really sorry that this is how you feel right now and that it scares you. Just be there I know this person will see what they are doing isn't helping their health or your relationship! Be very supportive! disorders are hard to deal with, try not to let her know you're not too scared because she needs you to be strong right now. Best Of Luck!!! Love ALways ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~
Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

2 posted 2000-06-18 01:45 PM

Wow, that was pretty good.  I can't say that i can relate though.  My advice to you?  It's kind of a tricky subject, maybe you should just trust the person, or maybe you shouldn't.  Sorry i couldn't be of more help, but still, good poem!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-15 07:28 PM



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