Teen Poetry #2 |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
well, baby, im sorry but theres nothing i can do i wish i could change something so id have more time with you but the fact is im buisy got my summer all planned out and as bad as this sounds i kinda left you out my schedule is full i got work all day but no matter what to be with you is what i pray im soo sorry but i need the money ill still get to see you we still have the weekends, honey but u dont like that you want to see me more and i understand how you feel but if i dont work, then ill be poor god i hate to do this to work all day all week "this summers gonna be like school!" you said and my will to work became weak my soul pours out before you id do anything u say maybe i could work less like only acouple of days maybe at the end of the summer instead of stocking up green maybe i should stock up on memories i think the truth ive seen i think that i might work less i might give up that goal maybe just 3 days a week so i dont hafta put you on hold i think that in the end when all is said and done its the memories that will stay longer and definatly be more fun this poem is pretty much self explainatory me and my GF just had a fight, and she left, so i sat down and wrote this, and as i did, i changed my priorties writing helps me decide things, ive found out because now i no what i need to do this summer work less, love more always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi I can understand how you fail to see someting when life gets busy. Sincerely A_L |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
As much of a hopeless romantic as I am, And the fact that what you did for your girlfriend made me see who you really are, and how much in love you are, just be careful! Please don't sacrifice your future for love. I know you love her and I am not very well informed on the situation, and it probably isn't my place to say anything, but I sacrificed my future for the guy I fell in lovw with. and I don't just mean I fell in love him, I fell head over heals butt in love with this guy. we were together for a long time. Everything was great we both cared and loved for eachother very much, but even time can change feelings of true love. And as my future went down the drain with eachg moment that I spent with him, so did his love for me. and now I'm left with nothing but my aching heart. I'm gald you're in love!!! Just look before you leap!! BEST OF LUCK!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. sorry to sound so cynical..or the pessimist. please just be careful! good luck |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Ah, very well written. Definetly you made the right choice in the end. Money or no money, we all will live, and its the memories that we will keep into old age, not the few extra bucks. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Well, that's another good one. Like somebody already said, don't sacrifice your future for that person, I'm sure they wouldn't want that. Just be true to yourself. Best of luck -Bel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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