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Something i have to say!! |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Saying goodbye is the hardest thing anyone has to do. Not only to a family member But also to your best friend, Growing up together, Going through tuff times, Picking each other up when we were down, Growing old together will never happen anymore, Giving me one last huge goodbye, Not knowing when I will see you again, So I stand here watching you wave goodbye to me. Holding back the tears Trying not to show the pain in my heat to the world But I couldn't I just saw my best friend leaving me, But that is something I’m going to have to do Not seeing you anymore Having to hold you in my heart forever more I will always love you, You’ll always be my best friend Even if you’re my little sister. Love you forever more. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ahhh, that's a very sweet poem. Tis also sweet your little sis is your best friend. I hope that you can visit her, or vise versa. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Dragon thanks for the respond's... I hope to see some of yours posted soon.. well i have to go take care .. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey hun! this is a very touching yet sweet poem! You'll see her again! Whether it be today or a while from now it won't matter because you guys are eternal friends and you share a bond like no one else...Sisterhood. I'm glad to hear that sibling rivalry doesn't exist in ALL families these days! lol. Hope you guys see eachother soon! Keep up the good writing! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Thanks Jessica for you support. We do fight a lot, but in turn we love each other to death and would die for each other... but its something she has to do and i dont blam her for not doing it but its going to be hard on me and my life... so thank you for the support and i hope to see some of you poems... bye |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
My little sister moved away once when I was 15 and again when I was 17, she's been gone for three years now and I hardly get to see her. She only lives 30 min. away, but we both work so much that even on the weekends it's tough to get to eachother. When we were little, we fought horribly, but we haven't really fought in a couple years. Not a day goes by that I don't talk about her to one of the guys in the factory or at a grocery store or something. I hope you can keep your chin up. Just remember that time heals all wounds and fades all scrars. Someday, things will be better and you'll have a totally different set of problems, it's inevitable. Jeremy D. Halstead |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Hey Jeremy thanks for your support i really need it! But some reason i dont think this time will heal. my heat is already broken even though she hasn't left yet. I know we had our bad times and good. but all and all were like best friends and i dont want to see her go! I know time will heal but i dont think it will heal very fast and anytime soon.. so i think i'm going to have a very long healing process... anyway thanks again take care much happenes to you  |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is a very sweet poem. life can be hard and people do pass in and out great post Bec i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Hey Bec, thanks you for responding.... i really need all the help and support i need... hope to see your poems really soon!! got to jet.. take care... S&I |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
I really loved that poem.... it makes me want to go and hug my sister right now! lol =) keep writing! |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
ChibiDeathscythe: thanks for the respond's, hey why don't you, you never know one day something might happen to her, she might move, and you wont see her anymore, i have about 4 days left with my little sister then i will not see her again till she's 18 and i'm in college... so think about how you treat your sister and vise versa then you know how hard it would be having to say goodbye!!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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