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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
We had become so close over the years Your parting from this relationship put me in tears When I look back I see wonderful memmories I wish I could be one of those li'l fairies I was just a lonely cloud drifting aimlessly You came without any invitation flawlessly You filled my thoughts and dreams All you've forgotten it seems You are my best friend and love We'll stay like that forever Though what you've really stings But pain is lessened by joy memmory brings |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
wow, i JUST wrote something about friends too, about memories and things like that this is a very good poem, well writen, good analgies, a feeling of pain yet a feeling of the need to move on as well very nice  always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:) |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I really like this poem. It hits really close to home. Nice work. Love, Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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zeke New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 3 |
I can really relate to the theme discussed in your poem. The joys and pains in life will eventually be forever cherished as memories. Excellent way to state these experiences. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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