|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-04-29Posts 15
on the day that we met,
my mind wasn't there.
i was thinking of someone else,
and how much HE cared.
that didn't work out,
that love wasn't true.
but then some time passed,
and now i have you.
we have a lot of fun,
it's been great from the start.
you've earned my trust, love, and affection,
and i've given you my heart.
i trust you not to break it,
and i know you'll take care.
because every time that i've needed someone,
you've always been there.
six months we've been together,
and every moment has been great.
the way it's all worked out,
i'm sure it must be fate.
the things that i'm feeling,
i know they must be true.
because i know one thing for sure,
and that's i'm in love with you.
[This message has been edited by nikki813 (edited 06-04-2000).]
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since 1999-12-25Posts 20
Hey, this is a really great poem. You express yourself well...keep up the good work!
since 1999-11-14Posts 69
Hey I really like this poem. I was starting to wonder if there was any happy love poems written any more, now they all seem to be about heartbreak...I loved how positive this poem was. Great job, keep writing!
since 2000-06-01Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
Marrisa was right, I think we all need to read something positive like that. You're a life saver. keep it up. bye.
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