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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Here's a fun kinda poem i wrote a while back. Sort of lashing out and hating it all at the same time. See what ya think By Him touched you once loved you twice watched you more cold as ice seen you there your not here show no emotion heart stand still bright eye shines heart grows dim sit alone tonight your with him --Hoppy 2-4-00 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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XTC_AngeL Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 17Australia |
I love your poem, it's full of emotion, and i'm sure most teenage chicks can relate to it. ¤XTC AngeL¤ |
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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
wow i never thought something so short could be full of so much emotion. great job on this, keep writing! |
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