|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-06-01Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
Powerless, victimised...but only by myself-me.
Relentless, unyielding...the torments that are my feelings.
Absent, immobilised...those who heal the pain I see.
Futile, tedius...longing just to find a reason.
Alive and burning..the memories of loss and treason.
I feel so much and can only wonder why
this bleeding sea of endless pain and confusion
has left me hung in a monotanous
nuece of silence.
Jeremy D. Halstead
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since 2000-01-08Posts 4697
Everyone feels like this sometimes, but you just have to pick yourself up and go on. You are never really powerless. Good writing.
"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
since 2000-05-31Posts 932
WOW! I love the way you express yourself! You definately have an extensive vocabulary and it helps your writing a lot!! Keep writing and let me know so I can read the next one! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~
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