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jenleslie
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since 2000-05-26
Posts 16
USA

0 posted 2000-05-31 03:24 PM


you didn't leave
when asked to stay
and held my hair back
instead of walking away.

Just when I thouhgt you were through
You showed me that you cared
and our friendship was true;
my heavy burdens you shared.

At times I may be a handful
but sometimes so are you.
It's those times our friendship grows stronger,
when it feels brand new.

Whether it be a scraped knee
or simply a broken heart,
Thanx for helping me
and hopefully I,too, did my part.

© Copyright 2000 jen - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697

1 posted 2000-05-31 03:38 PM


Friendship is a wonderful gift, you describe it beautifully! Welcome to Passions, I'll be looking for more of your work!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

~*Jennifer*~
New Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 6
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-05-31 06:54 PM


Friendship is great and everyone is very lucky when they find their best friend. I know that mine is the world's greatest. Your poem is a good way to express your feelings for youur friend.    
            ~*Jennifer*~

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-06-03 02:23 PM


This is a great poem! I know how you feel, I just got home from my best friends house I love her dearly. Best friends are the only ones who understand EVERYTHING! Keep up the writing! I hope you best friend has had the chance to read it and know how you feel! I'll be looking for more of your work-welcome to passions!
  Love ~*~Jessica~*~


LoveAll
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 148
B'dale, USA
4 posted 2000-06-04 02:50 PM


Perfect!  Friendship is one of God's greatest gifts...even with the rough times.  Make sure you tell this person how much you treasure him/her!

 "Of all those arts in which the wise excel,
Nature's chief masterpiece is writing well."
~Essay on Poetry, John Sheffield

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