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jenleslie
Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16
USA

0 posted 2000-06-02 05:40 PM


Look at him;
There he goes
He's not the I want
but somehow he manages
to keep me on my toes.
I can't imagine my world
without him in it.
He helps me smile
when things come crashimg down;
forever dazzling me with his wit.
I never have to be afraid
knowing he's by my side.
He's my friend and my conscience
chasing away the hurt and pain
never laughing when he finds out I've cried.
Maybe I'll tell him how I feel
but then again,
why wreck something so real?

 A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever.
~Jessamyn West

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Lucius Cade
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-06-02 09:25 PM


This is a great poem. I likedt his lines alot.

Maybe I'll tell him how I feel
but then again,
why wreck something so real?


 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

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