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Stood up by friends |
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mkvision New Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1 |
Just don’t say sorry I don’t want to hear it Because I know you didn’t mean it. I just don’t understand? We are a team How could you go? Go without me? Don’t you know? How this makes me feel? I just feel unwanted Are you for real? You know what I did? While you guys were out? I sat here alone, Waiting, waiting about. You know you could’ve called me It’s not much to ask You shouldn’t have left it Left it till last. Now just don’t say sorry I just want to forget this Wounds can heal And so can this. Don’t be nicer to me Just treat me the same You’re still all my friends There’s no one to blame. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
GREAT POEM!!!! The vocab isn't all that fancy, but the rythm is great. Something about that poem just takes me back to last June on my 19th birtday...well, you get the picture..great job. |
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jenleslie Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16USA |
i luved it! my friends have done that to me many times and every time i forget about and forgive them. so i can totally relate. A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever. ~Jessamyn West |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
This is a great poem. And you don't need "fancy" vocabulary to get your point across. The point is that you were hurt and willing to forgive those who hurt you. It takes a lot to do something like that! Glad to hear you have such a loving and forgiving heart towards your friends!LoVe ~*~Jessica~*~ |
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