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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2000-06-01 01:56 AM

Just don’t say sorry
I don’t want to hear it
Because I know you didn’t mean it.

I just don’t understand?
We are a team
How could you go?
Go without me?

Don’t you know?
How this makes me feel?
I just feel unwanted
Are you for real?

You know what I did?
While you guys were out?
I sat here alone,
Waiting, waiting about.

You know you could’ve called me
It’s not much to ask
You shouldn’t have left it
Left it till last.

Now just don’t say sorry
I just want to forget this
Wounds can heal
And so can this.

Don’t be nicer to me
Just treat me the same
You’re still all my friends
There’s no one to blame.

© Copyright 2000 mkvision - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-06-01 02:11 AM

GREAT POEM!!!!  The vocab isn't all that fancy, but the rythm is great. Something about that poem just takes me back to last June on my 19th birtday...well, you get the picture..great job.
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since 2000-05-26
Posts 16
2 posted 2000-06-02 05:13 PM

i luved it! my friends have done that to me many times and every time i forget about and forgive them. so i can totally relate.

 A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever.
~Jessamyn West

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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
3 posted 2000-06-02 07:49 PM

This is a great poem. And you don't need "fancy" vocabulary to get your point across. The point is that you were hurt and willing to forgive those who hurt you. It takes a lot to do something like that! Glad to hear you have such a loving and forgiving heart towards your friends!LoVe ~*~Jessica~*~
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