Teen Poetry #2 |
Today I Realized Something.... |
Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
Today I realized something.... I realized that my friends will not be around forever That we will not always be togather That the time we have is short And there are so many feelings still to sort But somehow, I will make it And my heart will be able to take it. Today I realized something.... I realized that relationships dont last forever That me and him will not always be togather That the time we have is short And there are so many feelings still to sort But somehow, I will make it And my heart will be able to take it. Today I realized something.... I realized that memories do last forever That my memories and I will always be togather That the time we have is long And forever they stay strong And now I know that I can make it And I have proven that my heart can take it. ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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Nutmeg1093 New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 4Cloquet, MN |
I think that a lot of people can really relate to this. We have a lot of things in life that eventually fade away, but we can always have the memories of them. I like the way that you wrote this poem. Nice job! |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Very nicely written. It's good that you have realized these things some people don't. I've got to admit sometimes i feel i won't make it, but in the end i know i will. Anyhow keep up the work. Isa "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Seccssy.. Passing youth, faded deisres,fleeting emotions,first friendship, first kiss,hug,love etc are all wonderful memmories which cannot be erased. Hold on to your memmories,dreams and everything which made you a good person in life. Sincerely A_L |
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jenleslie Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16USA |
you described how every person most likely feels about relationships and memmories at one time or another. i liked it a lot. A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever. ~Jessamyn West |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
Bravo! Bravo! no one could've said it better sweetie. miriam coronado |
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