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Teen Poetry #2

Internal Steampipe

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-06-01 02:19 AM

Internal Steampipe

This sensation is growing inside me.
It's absolutly unerving.
The boiling arisal of nothing
is empty yet returning.
Returning without a witness found
to see that I am hurting.
Only I can know what's here.
I alone am burning.
The mellow calm I render quietly
to the sudden lack of loving.
In this moment I clutch my fists
and fight the monster coming.
I close him off- my internal steampipe
from giving my disguise.
For all to behold.....nothing at all
but the glazing of my eyes.

Jeremy Halstead

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-06-05 10:46 PM

well I had to hunt for this one! lol. However I was eager to read it. Your writing conveys an excellent personality in a restless soul! Keep it up!! Always ~*~Jessica~*~

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

2 posted 2000-07-09 11:37 AM

Hey,
Liked it alot. Had to look for it though. Brought it back up for other people ot read again. You're still the ever tormented personal demon in yourself.

Thomas

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

3 posted 2000-08-09 01:57 PM

THIS IS JEREMY'S MOM. AND I THINK THAT THIS POEM SAYS ALOT ABOUT HIS WRITING TALENT. I HOPE IT IS ENJOYED BY ALL YOU TOO.

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

4 posted 2000-08-14 03:18 AM

Well...when I originally posted this little piece 'o work, only a couple of people read it and we have a whole crew of new poeple here. Just recently, this poem was selected for publication and earned me a spot as a judge in a national poetry competition on the 20th. I just wanted to re-share it with ya'll...thnx.

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-15 07:41 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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