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Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 10

0 posted 2000-05-02 01:52 PM

more than words can say
how much you mean to me
without you in my life
I don't know where I would be

sometimes I find myself wondering
what I would do without you
for even if you don't realize
there is so much you've helped me through

you took time when you really didn't have to
your own troubles seemed to disappear
as you gave me advice and comfort
you let me know you care

thank you for caring about me
and showing me the way
for all the love you are giving me
means more than words can say

© Copyright 2000 purplesunshine - All Rights Reserved
son of man
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-05-03 12:35 PM

this is a new one.
when did you write it?
i like it alot.
is it about me? lol
great job!
love ya!


Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-04 09:18 AM

This is really sweet, I like it a lot!

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
3 posted 2000-05-04 10:07 AM

Very sweet  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-05-06 08:08 PM

What a loving poem! Welcome to the family..please check your email for a special message.  
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-05-07 06:16 PM

This is great, quite expressive and heart-felt. It's cool to have people in our lives who mean so much to us, and inspire us in so many ways. Very good job.


 It's another world
But it's something more than ordinary
Such a lovely day
And it's nothing more than ordinary living
That you're living
- Lit

Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44

6 posted 2000-05-08 12:02 PM

this is a great poem, it'd great to have people in our lives that make us feel this way.  keep it up!  rachel
New Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1

7 posted 2000-08-19 07:56 PM

My Love,
That is a great poem.  I love it with all of my heart as I love the writer of it too.  You have a special talent Mandy.  You are a very special person who knows what she wants and needs to just go for it.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2007-11-15 07:41 PM



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