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How precious a true friendship is....
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How precious a true friendship is.... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
To A True Friend: I Love You The day I met you I found a friend. . . And a friendship that I pray will never end. Your smile - so sweet And so bright - Kept me going When day was as dark as night. You never ever judged me, You understood my sorrow. Then you told me it needn’t be that way And gave me the hope of a better tomorrow. You were always there for me, I knew I could count on you. You gave me advice and encouragement Whenever I didn’t know what to do. You helped me learn to love myself You made life seem so good. You said I can do anything I put my mind to And suddenly I knew I could. There were times when we didn’t see eye to eye And there were days when both of us cried. But even so we made it through: Our friendship hasn’t yet died. Circumstances have pulled us apart, We are separated by many miles. Truly, the only thing that keeps me going Is my treasured memory of your smile. This friendship we share Is so precious to me, I hope it grows and flourishes And lasts unto infinity. You are so extraspecial to me And so this to you I really must tell: You are my one true friend, My Guardian Angel. Our friendship is one-in-a-million So let’s hold on to it and each other. We cannot let this chance of pure bliss fly away For there will never be another. I love you. I will always love you. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. What a wonderful piece you have here. A friend like this is better then gold, treasure it.  |
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Duchessofhearts Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 13 |
I have someone like that.I would like to ask if i could send it to her? |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Duchessofhearts, of course you may send this poem to your friend. Just acknowledge me, yeah? |
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DC Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 13Arkansas |
Great poem! I loved it! I sent it to my best friend because it describes our friendship so well. Keep up the good work!! DC |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow! That poem perfectly discribes true friendship. Luckily, I know what true friendship is, and it is one of the few things that holds me up though this trial of love that I so often write about. Good job! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poem....it's really touching. Do you mind if I send it to a friend of mine as well? Thanks Salooma |
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eve_angel Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 23Australia |
I really like this poem. It has a lot of feeling in it. it is a great first post. Keep em coming. |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
WOW, is all I have to say. You describe your friend the exact same way I would with my best friend. She too is my guardian angel, I'm glad that you like my poetry, and I like your poetry as well. Just the way you described it just rang a bell with me. Again, excellent poem!!!! keep them coming! Poe  |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
*sitting speachless* that was incredible! I've been tryin' so hard to come up with a poem as this one for my own circumstances and havn't been able to. This is like perfect, almost strait outta my head and onto your paper. This is a great piece of work!! "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it." Henry David Thoreau Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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Thomas Jono Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25 |
wow, this poem is incredible, i wish i had the brains to think what you think when you write your poems..this is the exact feeling i have for my friend...she's also my gaurdian angel...i have no idea what else to say but keep on at it...you have the gift to write good poems like this, keep it up... Thomas Jono |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Shall I say welcome to Passions ESP?? LOL. This is a nice piece though. It is lovely to know that you care about a person so deeply to express your brilliant talent to tell them. You have beautiful descriptions in this piece that compliment the rhyme. Very nice work ESP. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
thanx for this poem, it's really a great piece about friendship, I really will send it to a friend of mine, who needs to know that I feel about her that way, thanx for expressing my feelings when I didn't have any inspiration about it, natalie... |
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Mustangbabe New Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 3Oklahoma |
I love this poem! It describes how I feel about my guy best friend. He means so much to me. You do really great work. Keep it up! Fate only takes you so far! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!! Much appreciated!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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