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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-06-01 01:54 AM

To Dance

Her feet are dazzling upon the floor
that I now envy such.
In quickness, movement coordinates art
in a course that says so much.
Along a pattern insipred by love,
she jerks to form the way
that draws a picture displaying truly
what life could be someday.
Feeling taken by cupids touch,
I try to immitate chance.
Wanting only to create true love,
I try to truly dance.

-Jeremy D. Halstead

Crystalina123
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 228

1 posted 2000-06-01 10:31 AM

Jeremy,
I like this poem. I get the impression that it can be perceived on many levels. That type of poem is usually the best kind. Nice work.

Crystal

"The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

2 posted 2000-06-16 01:07 PM

Hey jeremy

I honestly loved this poem...no surprise, I love everything u write. The more I read your work, the more I get the feeling that you have a very unique and insightful way of looking at practically everything in life - you'll go far with that kind of perspective my friend.
Much love
Kandi

~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

3 posted 2000-07-09 11:41 AM

Went searching for this one to. We're all dancers in this great ballroom. Enjoy your dance.

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss the dance."
-Garth Brooks

Thomas

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-15 07:40 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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