Teen Poetry #2 |
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Dear Mary |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand ![]() |
Dear Mary By the light of the moon At the window she sits, Writing a letter to her friend. ‘Dear Mary’ She writes, ‘I miss you so much... Wish that you were here...’ As she throws it from the window, The wind picks it up, Sends the tear stained letter Swirling to the sky. She closes her eyes And turns from the window; She hopes it will reach Her friend in Heaven. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Hey, Lynne, I dont think your poems are too profound for the young, try the corner club instead. ^_^ Jõmes |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a beautiful poem, truly beautiful. I have no words to say how it stirred me within. I hope you will post a lot more of your poetry because it surely is wonderful. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx u two.. James.. yep, i am quite settled in the pub now, lol.. ooh, i am underaged.. ^^ Lizzie.. thank u very much. ^_^ sorry I didn't reply earlier.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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