I CAN'T BELIEVE MY PAIN ( please everyone read this & reply)

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Ben Singleton
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-05-19 06:42 AM

It's been a few days
Since we tore apart
I'm losing my life
Aswell as my heart.

It started off great
We had lots of fun
Like when the rain clouds move over
And out comes the sun.

But the lights soon turned to dark
When YOU split up with me
I was left on my own
With no-body to see
Was it a joke?
Because no-body cared
Did she really Love me?
I bet she was dared.

I'm on my own now
With no one to talk to
Still wondering how
I still Love You.

A few days after
You tell all my friends
You want to get back with me
You wanna make amends

Now everybody hates me
For not saying yes
Will somebody help me
My lifes now a mess!

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

1 posted 2000-05-19 10:21 AM

Good poem, I hope you find a solution.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-05-19 11:53 AM

Your probably right for not saying yes.
think you saw some true colors, time to move on. Hurt once, shame on her, hurt twice, shame on you!
~~just some thoughts~~
nice writing!

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

3 posted 2000-05-19 07:21 PM

Good poem. I'm sorta in the same sitution. Just don't let everyone get to you. You probably said no because you didn't want to get hurt again, I couldn't blame you. Just remember things do work out. I hope that you do find a solution.

Isa

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

4 posted 2000-05-19 07:46 PM

This is a great poem. Forget about what other poeple want you to do. Listen to what your heart has to say, some day, they will also understand.

Hope you find a solution.

Ben Singleton
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 18

5 posted 2000-05-20 11:03 AM

Cheers, all of you.
You all seem to have been there before.

Dina
Junior Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 10

6 posted 2000-05-20 03:31 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. Ben don't let your life be a mess, just live on for you will find better. If not give me a call k!
She is not worth it!

the dark angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 37

7 posted 2000-05-21 08:48 AM

somewhere we've all been. Class writing-good on ya for saying no, if she screwed you over then she doesn't deserve you back
Love and huggles
the dark angel
-x-

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

8 posted 2000-05-21 08:13 PM

well written.. sad words, mm, sometimes life is like that, but I think u were probably right for saying no, although, it may have been an honest mistake on her part, and she only just realised now, but, if u say yes, the same may happen again.. just wait it out, see what happens, huh? In the meantime, don't break your heart, k? *_^

Fantastic writing..
Lynne

Ben Singleton
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 18

9 posted 2000-05-22 02:01 PM

Thanks for yor help, evryone has now apologised and me and Joanne are just friends.Cheers to everyone who read the poem and replied, Thanks for your concern

luvable
New Member

since 2000-04-20

Posts 9

10 posted 2000-06-15 11:56 AM

This is a really good poem!! I'm sorry that this happened to you but you were right for not saying yes!! I hope everything works out for you!! I know how you feel!!

Luv lots,
Luvable

Phoebee
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 42
Peoria, AZ

11 posted 2000-07-09 08:10 PM

I know I'm a little late, but I'd still like to put in my two cents. This happens to everyone at least once in their life. It's good that you two are friends again. Everything happens for a reason.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2007-11-15 07:40 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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