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MrHat
Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 34
Gilroy, Ca

0 posted 2000-06-03 03:45 AM


Immobilized by fear
Still and silent
Through the night
I try to get out;
Try to escape
But I am imprisoned
In a room
My OWN room
I close my eyes
Forget the pain
I find light
In this ugly night of life
Light being
Tonight is just that
A night of LIFE

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Lani_DarkOne
Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152
UK
1 posted 2000-06-03 09:33 AM


I can't find the words to describe this,..I've always felt like that.
I didn't quite understand whether you(or whoever you're describing) has found the light? Maybe I'll find it when it becomes day.

Lani_DarkOne
Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152
UK
2 posted 2000-06-03 09:34 AM


sorry,mistake!!submitted twice.

[This message has been edited by Lani_DarkOne (edited 06-03-2000).]

Lani_DarkOne
Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152
UK
3 posted 2000-06-03 09:34 AM


????!!!

[This message has been edited by Lani_DarkOne (edited 06-03-2000).]

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