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NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 2000-05-30 11:36 PM


i find my self floating
in a small little world
with a purple sky
stretching on forever.
suspended in midair
with my long white hair
falling up into the heavens
& exotic flowers
pouring magic
adorn it.
i open my eyes.
and a little girl
sits across me
looking
and our eyes meet
and we stare into eachothers eyes forever
not even having to speak
we know,
the message we share.
and i look down
and see
worlds that have long since been gone
than i finally realize
who the little girl
who sits before me is,
she is me.



 nat<~~~~funny girl



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Lucius Cade
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-05-31 12:43 PM


Wow, such power leaving so many possibilites. I didnt know where to start when analysing it. I still dont it was all breath taking,

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

emma
New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 8

2 posted 2000-05-31 02:11 PM


hey this was a good poem full of meaning and symbols of life!  check out some of my poems!

~*Emma*~

 

jenleslie
Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16
USA
3 posted 2000-05-31 03:12 PM


that was very moving. none of the poems i write are very moving. at least i dont think they are. anyway it was very good.
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