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NaTaLy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43brooklyn,ny,usa |
i find my self floating in a small little world with a purple sky stretching on forever. suspended in midair with my long white hair falling up into the heavens & exotic flowers pouring magic adorn it. i open my eyes. and a little girl sits across me looking and our eyes meet and we stare into eachothers eyes forever not even having to speak we know, the message we share. and i look down and see worlds that have long since been gone than i finally realize who the little girl who sits before me is, she is me. nat<~~~~funny girl |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Wow, such power leaving so many possibilites. I didnt know where to start when analysing it. I still dont it was all breath taking, Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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emma New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 8 |
hey this was a good poem full of meaning and symbols of life! check out some of my poems! ~*Emma*~ |
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jenleslie Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16USA |
that was very moving. none of the poems i write are very moving. at least i dont think they are. anyway it was very good. |
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