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emma
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since 2000-05-31
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0 posted 2000-05-31 08:39 AM


As I laugh at him,
He laughs at me.
As I look at him,
He looks at me.
As I hold his hand,
He holds mine.

We do everything TOGETHER

As I hug him,
He hugs me.
As I kiss him,
He kisses me.
As I think of him,
He thinks of me.

We do everything TOGETHER

As I love him,
He loves me.

LOVE is doing everything TOGETHER




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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-05-31 03:26 PM


Yes, love is a wonderful thing, and it involves doing lots of things together. Welcome to Passions!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

jenleslie
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since 2000-05-26
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2 posted 2000-05-31 03:40 PM


i like the way you expressed yourself. great poem. i enjoyed it.
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