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Jasmine
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since 2000-02-15
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0 posted 2000-05-31 01:18 AM


fingers stained
from running my tiny fingers
through your hair
blue
purple
green
red
orange
all the colors of you
months pass by
my feelings don't change
only the colors do.

           *Jasmine*

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Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-05-31 01:52 AM


Ok now thats three poems about your bf's hair.   Does he dye it different colors every month or what? Anyways great poem.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Jasmine
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since 2000-02-15
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2 posted 2000-05-31 02:12 PM


Lucius Cade-
    Actually, he does dye his hair about once a month.  Currently, its blue.  I've never even seen him with his natural color of hair.  Thanks for saying it was a good poem.

           -Jasmine

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