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Laura56
New Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 5
Oregon

0 posted 2000-05-28 10:41 PM

                   I MISS YOU

     That night when you walked out the door, I thought that it was over forever.  You're still constantly on my mind and in my heart I'll remember you.

     I miss you so much that I cry every night wishing you were at my side.  Even though you're with other girls try not to forget me.

     I miss you I can't go on with any other relationship because I keep thinking you'll come back.  All my friends keep telling me to move on, but for some reason I just can't.

     I miss you so much
     I'll never forget you please
          don't forget me.

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

1 posted 2000-05-29 05:49 AM

Hola, Welcome to Passions!!!

Great poem, i think we all know where your comming from, your not the only one! There is always some one that you dont wanna let go of. Afraid theres not a whole lot i can tell you to help, just keep writing, it really does help!!!

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Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

2 posted 2000-05-30 02:53 AM

nice first post, welcome to Passions.. ^_^ hmm, what a heartbreaking poem! *_^ =P
keep writing.
no, don't forget him, I'm sure you wont be forgotten either, but my advice is - if it didn't work out, just keep on livin'.. ^_^ (easier said than done, I am sure.. ^_^ but you'll get there)

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-05-30 02:53 AM

sorry, posted twice..

Lynne

[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 05-30-2000).]

~*Jennifer*~
New Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 6
Arkansas

4 posted 2000-05-30 01:01 PM

I think that your 1st poem is great. I've had those feelings too. We all have them. Keep writing. ~*Jennifer*~

P.S. Welcome to Passions

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-05-30 02:03 PM

I've been in your place before, not that long ago actually, and it's worse than zits, homework, blind dates and lima beans combined.

I like your poem, it's so personalized, like you wrote down exactly what thoughts were going through your mind. I love that kind of writing. Well, welcome to our little group, I'd love to see some more of your poems, and go find yourself a total hottie for the summer, one who is a perfect gentleman who loves chick-flicks and will paint your toenails. Peace out chick!

*~Meredith~*

It's another world
But it's something more than ordinary
Such a lovely day
And it's nothing more than ordinary living
That you're living
- Lit

babygyrl126
New Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3

6 posted 2000-05-31 10:22 PM

I can tell that you were writing from your heart. It sounds really good. I can relate to what you are feeling and I can't tell you it gets better, but for me I just start writing and it takes my anger away a little. write until there's nothing left to say. It's alright life does go on.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

7 posted 2000-06-01 02:02 AM

The message you sent is one that I think mos people can relate to. That fact that we can identify it through your writing is a good sign, too. Keep writin...I always will.

Jeremy Halstead.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

8 posted 2000-06-02 04:01 PM

Hi Laura56
To love someone so much is really difficult but when you do its a terrific feeling.

Sincerely
A_L

jenleslie
Junior Member

since 2000-05-26

Posts 16
USA

9 posted 2000-06-02 05:47 PM

great poem. hope to read more of your posts.

A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever.
~Jessamyn West

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