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since 2000-05-28
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0 posted 2000-05-28 10:41 PM


                   I MISS YOU

     That night when you walked out the door, I thought that it was over forever.  You're still constantly on my mind and in my heart I'll remember you.

     I miss you so much that I cry every night wishing you were at my side.  Even though you're with other girls try not to forget me.

     I miss you I can't go on with any other relationship because I keep thinking you'll come back.  All my friends keep telling me to move on, but for some reason I just can't.

     I miss you so much
     I'll never forget you please
          don't forget me.

© Copyright 2000 Lori - All Rights Reserved
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-05-29 05:49 AM

Hola, Welcome to Passions!!!

Great poem, i think we all know where your comming from, your not the only one! There is always some one that you dont wanna let go of.  Afraid theres not a whole lot i can tell you to help, just keep writing, it really does help!!!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
2 posted 2000-05-30 02:53 AM

nice first post, welcome to Passions.. ^_^ hmm, what a heartbreaking poem! *_^ =P
keep writing.
no, don't forget him, I'm sure you wont be forgotten either, but my advice is - if it didn't work out, just keep on livin'.. ^_^ (easier said than done, I am sure.. ^_^ but you'll get there)

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
3 posted 2000-05-30 02:53 AM

sorry, posted twice..


[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 05-30-2000).]

New Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 6
4 posted 2000-05-30 01:01 PM

   I think that your 1st poem is great. I've had those feelings too. We all have them. Keep writing.      ~*Jennifer*~

P.S. Welcome to Passions  

Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-05-30 02:03 PM

I've been in your place before, not that long ago actually, and it's worse than zits, homework, blind dates and lima beans combined.   I like your poem, it's so personalized, like you wrote down exactly what thoughts were going through your mind. I love that kind of writing. Well, welcome to our little group, I'd love to see some more of your poems, and go find yourself a total hottie for the summer, one who is a perfect gentleman who loves chick-flicks and will paint your toenails. Peace out chick!  


 It's another world
But it's something more than ordinary
Such a lovely day
And it's nothing more than ordinary living
That you're living
- Lit

New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3

6 posted 2000-05-31 10:22 PM

I can tell that you were writing from your heart. It sounds really good. I can relate to what you are feeling and I can't tell you it gets better, but for me I just start writing and it takes my anger away a little. write until there's nothing left to say. It's alright life does go on.
Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
7 posted 2000-06-01 02:02 AM

The message you sent is one that I think mos people can relate to.  That fact that we can identify it through your writing is a good sign, too.  Keep writin...I always will.

Jeremy Halstead.

since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
8 posted 2000-06-02 04:01 PM

Hi Laura56
To love someone so much is really difficult but when you do its a terrific feeling.


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since 2000-05-26
Posts 16
9 posted 2000-06-02 05:47 PM

great poem. hope to read more of your posts.

 A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever.
~Jessamyn West

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