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0 posted 2000-05-29 07:00 PM

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Love is Sick and Life is Short

Love is sick, and I feel its you
I never asked, but knew it anyway

Life is short, I and know its true
All these things aren’t just in lieu

Life is what you choose
Everyday for what you lose,

Love is tragic, why can’t you see
Its anything but magic

Life is sad, don’t you know by now?
Tragedies around drive me mad

Life is uncertain, always running in circles
You can never tell when it’s curtains

Love is like water, and nothing’s for real
Life is a strange mixture, somehow that congeals


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[This message has been edited by Deranger (edited 05-29-2000).]

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since 1999-07-19
Posts 58
california, usa
1 posted 2000-05-30 12:24 PM

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2 posted 2000-05-30 03:58 PM

This is a good poem, and we all feel like this sometimes. You have to remember the good things about life and love, because the good outweighs the bad, easily.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-05-30 08:17 PM

You took the words right out of my mouth. All fellow pessimists say right on! (just joking, ummmm, whatever) Good poem, be real!


 It's another world
But it's something more than ordinary
Such a lovely day
And it's nothing more than ordinary living
That you're living
- Lit

Vball Chickie1624
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116
New York
4 posted 2000-05-30 10:19 PM

Hi! Great poem...I love it...keep writing.

- luv ya -

 "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do."

"The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say."
- Anais Nin

"Follow your own heart, not others."

Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38
5 posted 2000-05-31 11:13 AM

Great Poem! I love how it all flows together. Keep it up.
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 4
Cloquet, MN
6 posted 2000-06-01 02:35 PM

Hey!! Keep the chin up!  I guess we can all feel this way sometimes, but just remember that it all gets good with time!  I promise!! : )  Nice writing.  It all goes together very nicely.
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since 2000-05-26
Posts 16
7 posted 2000-06-02 05:18 PM

good poem. everyone feels that way at one time or another. it all works out in the end though. keep up the writing.

 A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever.
~Jessamyn West

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