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Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-05-31 11:41 PM

I am sending you a rose today,
A great message it does bring.
It tells of all the words I wish to say,
And how my heart does sing.

It tells stories of great happiness,
And memories from the past.
It even brings some stories of sadness,
But those sad times did not last.

With this rose I am telling you,
That to me you are so dear.
I hope this shows how much I love you,
And that I will always hold you near.

By the time this rose gets to you,
It may be very dry.
It may be wilted, it may fade,
But unlike this rose, my love for you will never die.

 ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

© Copyright 2000 Kia - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-06-01 02:22 AM

Hey, I got to be the very first person to comment on this poem.  What an honor...the symbolic value really is impressive.  The idea and feeling were nice too.  keep em' comin'!!


Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-06-01 09:36 AM

Oh, wow that is a beautiful poem.Very nice. I look forward to reading more of you poems, now that I've got some time to read and post here again YAY!!! Anyway, very nice poem  

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

New Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 6
3 posted 2000-06-01 11:01 AM

Wow! I really like the feeling of this poem. I also like the way you compare the rose to love. Keep writin!  

Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
4 posted 2000-06-02 07:24 PM

Wonderful analogies and personification~You seem to have a restless yet calming soul. I love all of your poems! hopefully I will get some more posted soon...when I'm not too lazy. LoL =0) well,keep up the excellent writing! Always and Forever ~*~Jessica~*~
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