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Jimmy
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove

0 posted 2000-05-28 06:07 PM


My world is so ****ed up right now,
The only sound I hear is a giant pow.

I am praying to god that i will soon leave this living hell.
My body is falling, My heart has already fell.

For quite a long time now I have felt this way,
I am still praying for my final day.



© Copyright 2000 Jimmy VanNatta - All Rights Reserved
heatherbear
Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 48

1 posted 2000-05-28 09:11 PM


This is a really sad poem and you can't give up.  Life is the most precious gift that we have been lucky enough to recieve.  No one should give up~~trust me i know!!  I've been there many times and now I am happier than I have been my whole life!  Hang in there!

~~Heatherbear~~

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