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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
The stars come out to play we stand in night, the end of day walking along the ocean side talking about times gone by the moon shines off the water in your eye stareing in aw I break silence with a sigh and the wind blows through me, leaving a chill I think back and remember those days still and can't believe how we've changed so much I never thought that day would come I never thought i'd miss you this much but as the day grew short and nights were long I sat back in my chair but couldn't write your song 5-23-00 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats. -- Howard Aiken |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
The last line of this is amazing! I love it! ...Daysleeper... "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller. "But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin." "In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy." "Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World" |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
thanks for the reply There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats. -- Howard Aiken |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
hoppy...i think this is one of your best. It's really beautiful and I must agree the last line is really touching. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Really effective. Made me think alot...the last line was summed it all up.. That was v. good... Lani |
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