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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This is a poem my best friend wrote and i just though i would share with you all and get your opinions. Forgotten time, it's only a matter of time before he leaves again, a broken child waits by the front door waiting in the dark, the horrible roar of the engine which she always feared, started, the sound echoed in the child's ears, and tears slide down the child's face, and the loneliness fills the child's heart, it's only companion in the night "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Your friend wrote a good poem, but it's so sad. It's always horrible when a child is left alone, and I hope writing this helped your friend heal. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Oh, this is such a beautiful poem, but so sad and heartwrenching. Children are my weakest topic, I can't stand anything horrible for a child and that last line just got to me. You're friend has a truely amazing gift. It's really beautiful. "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Thanks for the responses. My friend also thanks you. Isa "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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