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Teen Poetry #2
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emptyness
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA
0 posted 2000-05-27 10:14 PM

never will i forget you
never will i forgive you
never will we be the same

i will never have my soul returned
i will never know peace
i will never see the sun

there is no light at the tunnels end
there are no songs of joy
only tourment and sorrow with my friends


 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write
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mickel2995
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 48
1 posted 2000-05-27 11:26 PM

I love it! It's short, simple and to the point! Great job!


 
pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
2 posted 2000-05-29 01:14 PM

good poem emptyness    you write w/such emotion...i can feel your pain! can't wait to see more from you!
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