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mickel2995
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since 2000-05-24
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0 posted 2000-05-29 12:41 PM


Where is the good in good-bye?
I walk away and you begin to cry,
I turn a round to see that tear in your eye.
I wish so much to take your pain away, but it was you descison on that rainy November day.
Wipe that tear from your eye, Please before I start to cry.  
Tell me where the good is in good-bye.
It's time for me to move on, and time for you too, we've drug this on way to long, but before I leave forever, tell me; where the good is in good-bye?


 

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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
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1 posted 2000-05-29 12:51 PM


Wow, yeah, where is the good in goodbye.. htis is great! "where is the good in goodbye"... aah, amazing writing, mickel, so sad.. and TRUE.. ^_^

Lynne



mickel2995
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since 2000-05-24
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2 posted 2000-05-29 12:55 PM


Thanks!  Moving on is hard and there really is no good in it, until we move on and realize the world isn't ending, thanks again, Micale
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