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Blondie69 Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 13 |
Can I go to a party where no one's drunk or high? Can I go somewhere, where no one is crying over some guy? Can I go back to my old life? No, i can't! It's time to grow up, and face new fears Overcome obstacles with smiles and tears While other are drinking and doing dope I will stand tall, full of hope. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
'I will stand tall, full of hope', that's something i want to achieve. I feel like that every day...growing up is real scary..you're poem captures the want to go back into child hood...really good structure..straight to the point. Lani |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Growing up is hard, especally now, but we all must hold on to our morals and, as you say, "stand tall, full of hope". Great poem. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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