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Jesus69ed
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since 2000-05-25
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0 posted 2000-05-25 06:31 PM


Good morning

In the morning when I wake, I think
Of things to do that day. I think about who
to love and who to hate. Whos to real and
whos to fake. Where to go and what to take
Everyday the same old thing. Thoughts of
Joys  and diamond rings. Discussions of
love once had ,fears defeated, joys to have.
So in the morning when I wake, I think of
things and they are all the same.
Maybe this is just a dream, then the day
would end. I cant wait to see what
tommrow brings things gotta change,
cant ever be the same.


[This message has been edited by Jesus69ed (edited 05-25-2000).]

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Alwye
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1 posted 2000-05-25 10:05 PM


Very well done, with a very true message...things do have to change, as much as we may resist it.  Exellent post, keep up the great work!

 *Krista Knutson*

~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
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2 posted 2000-05-26 03:45 PM


This is a very nice post....someting everyone thinks about. It's very well put.

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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