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Teen Poetry #2
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Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
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0 posted 2000-05-26 02:39 PM

Is this a test
to see the real me.
I wonder as I breath
am I to be hurt?
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Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781
1 posted 2000-05-26 03:47 PM

Wow...those 4 lines say so much, I love it. It's so short and to the point and yet you can sense the emotion in it. Really nice work  

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."
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