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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-05-25 08:18 AM

Will you cry at my funeral?
As they lower me to the ground?
Will you find my gold id bracelet?
It's in the lost and found.
Will you promise to never forget,
the way it used to be?
And will you never let him,
forget what he did to me?
Will you always remember,
all the good times we had?
And remember I am with you,
whenever you are sad.
Will you please remember,
to never let me go?
And always remember to think of me,
whenever it may snow.
Please try to remember,
and try hard to forget
Will you please let me know,
if I ever was a regret?
And no matter what,
don't ever let go./
Though we may be apart,
I'll see you soon, you know.
Just try hard to remember,
I am never coming home.
And please remember you'll see me.
Just remember you're not alone.

Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through.

Ben Singleton
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 18

1 posted 2000-05-25 05:24 PM

Hey, Tough Love.I've been there many a time. But you will pull through coz your poem felt true and you sound like a fighter!

brendon2k
Junior Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
none

2 posted 2000-05-31 11:27 AM

Wonderful poem, and i can totaly relate to the feeling of losing someone. It flows perfectly together. Very deep and sad. Over i loved the poem. keep it up.

emma
New Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 8

3 posted 2000-05-31 02:07 PM

hey that was a wonderful poem! you have a beautiful gift! never stop!
~*Emma*~

jenleslie
Junior Member

since 2000-05-26

Posts 16
USA

4 posted 2000-05-31 03:18 PM

awesome poem. it totally describes how it feels to lose someone you cared for a lot.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2000-11-08 03:45 PM

thanks all. just wanted to add this to my library

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

6 posted 2002-11-01 03:29 AM

wow, there were some very strong lines in this piece.

you've come a long way, girl.

:>

good write.

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-11-15 07:47 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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