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Teen Poetry #2

I heart you!

JennyeMeshan
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-02-29 11:09 AM

I heart your eyes,
that gaze into mine,
I heart your smile,
that shines brightly,
I heart you!

I heart your pure soul,
that teaches me right from wrong,
I heart your kiss,
So soft and sweet like no other,
I heart you!

I heart your embrace,
all around my body,
I heart your voice,
So deep and melting,
I heart you!

I heart your heart,
that keeps me near,
I heart your touch,
So rough yet soothing,
I heart you!

I heart your sytle,
so unqiue and free,
I heart your life,
because it's with me,
I heart you!

I heart your love,
that makes me light,
I heart your mind,
beause you know,
I love you!

-~JeNnYeMeShAn~

"If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-02-29 12:11 PM

Very nice poem. Creative style! Unique description that works.
Danny

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

2 posted 2000-02-29 05:17 PM

jennye: simple, yet also very deep... i like the way you proceed with ideas in this poem... and good job of being consistant to your theme...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious pries

And their bleating was like a wet salmon
slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2002-03-11 12:52 PM

This is very creative and sweet!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-15 07:47 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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