Teen Poetry #2 |
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*poetry in motion* |
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NaTaLy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43brooklyn,ny,usa |
the sky is bright pink and you sit there across me on a park bench feeding the pigions watchin the world go by. you catch me stare and you smile but i stare away lookin at the roller bladers go by. i get up without sayin a word, and as im about 2 leave we stare into eachothers eyes for an eternal second ill never forget your face and i ponder this while walking back to my little apartment on the east side. nat<~~~~funny girl |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Wow, your imagery was very good. I could just picture the sky, the pigeons and the roller bladers. I loved the poem. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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