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since 2000-05-23
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0 posted 2000-05-23 10:08 AM

If you read my other poem (under 'could friends be lovers') you'll know how I'm feeling :

A Dreamer's Dream

I hope it will come true,
I hope that it will be -

The dream that I have dreamt,
The dream of you and me...

Is it possible for it to happen?
Is it possible for it to be?

The love that I have for you,
The love I hope you'll give to me...

You are so distant,
Yet you seem so near -

The thought of losing you,
That thought I fear...

I wonder if will come true,
I wonder if it will be...


I had several ways of structuring it - but at the moment I just want my feelings to be heard.

© Copyright 2000 Haroon Khan - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 15
1 posted 2000-05-23 10:13 AM

I like this one to, I guess its about the same girl.  

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-23 03:41 PM

Your feelings come through loud and clear...beautifully expressed, Haroon.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

3 posted 2000-05-24 02:18 AM

I don't understand the comment about being hard to go from friendship to love.

You can't truly love someone unless you are friends first...would you love someone you didn't like ?

Go for her your least you will know if you are just destined to be friends...she may even feel the same way you won't know unless you go for it.

Good luck...You write and express yourself very well.



since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
4 posted 2000-05-24 07:02 PM

Alrighty dude, its clear that this thing will contiue to eat at your very soul until you join good Deranger here and the loony bin, so i advise you to either forget her (yeah, right) or tell her what you think.  In fact, just go for her!  Your poetry reflects your desperation, a mirrior to the soul it is.  Suffering is much too time consuming, live or die, jump or stay, your choice ultimately.  

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

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