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Petals Fall |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
I feel forgotten I feel uneasy, Are you thinking,dreaming of me, My fragile heart is weeping, Worrying of you, Where are you?, I miss you so, My body feels cold, I'm losing feeling, Sitting here waiting, For you, only you, Scared your too far gone, Out of my reach, out of my grasp, You know and I know, You still love me, I love you so, Don't make me worry, Don't make me cry, You're watching my roses wilt, You're smelling the scent, My sweet scent, Watching my petals fall, Watching them fall to your feet, Followed by your own tears, Crying over me, Crying from the pain, Dry your tears, I"m still here, Petals Fell for you. ~JeNnYeMeShAn   "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
JM, enjoyed reading this poem. ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
*BOOP* |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Hey, what happened to the postscript at the end of the poem explaining the inspiration? It is a lovely lil poem....me is curious!!! hah hah surprise surprise! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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