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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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0 posted 2000-05-22 10:32 AM


I miss you
I need you
I just  want to be with you

I want you
I adore you
I desire to have you

Someday, you and me
We just have to be
You are my one and only
Near you I shall never be lonely

I just need you to know
That you will always make me glow
Always make me shine
Someday soon, you are going to be mine



 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
Daysleeper
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since 2000-04-23
Posts 119

1 posted 2000-05-22 09:51 PM



Very hot, impassioned poem. I like it, and I hope the person this is directed at likes you just as much.

...Daysleeper...


 "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller.
"But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."
"In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy."
"Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World"



Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-05-23 12:22 PM


He's in love with me, but I'm working on it. I'm falling out of love, and back into it at the same time...


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
3 posted 2000-05-23 11:07 PM


*~**bump**~*


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-05-24 03:12 PM


Well, I like the poem....all the best with the guy it's directed at!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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Massachusetts ~USA~
5 posted 2000-05-24 04:55 PM


Thanks Again!


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
6 posted 2000-05-24 07:08 PM


Well, i'll be, a love poem that with positive outcomes, and even on this forum! the best of luck Steph, hope it works outs.  oh and BTW, great poem!
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
7 posted 2000-05-24 07:29 PM


and once again...THANK YOU!!! :
Yeah it is trange for a POSITIVE love poem, especially for me...today he was talking about wanting me to move there sooner...eeeeek!!!! I really am falling in LOVE with the RIGHT person this time...  


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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