Stepping (i think i done good)

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Teen Poetry #2

Stepping (i think i done good)

hoppy
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since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-05-23 01:10 AM

Here's a little poem i wrote by just putting some none related thoughts together to make them related *L* makes no sense but just read and see.

STEPPING

The words I spoke alone last night,
Were full of anger, fear, and fright;
I trembled and stumbled about
While I embrased a moment of doubt,
And knew that what you desired to hear
Went something like, I love you dear.
Though the night's air was warmly inviting,
I had to stoped for a moment of nail biting.
The answer pressed to be answered immediatly,
Though I went about the situation prudently.
Weighing odds while pondering destiny
And concluded i'd keep the rest of me.
So I tucked sanity into my rugged hat
And stepped into darkness, blind as a bat

Written by: Hoppy
5-29-00

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats.
-- Howard Aiken

Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

1 posted 2000-05-23 03:38 AM

Wow this is one of the best poems I have read. I love it honestly.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-05-23 04:03 PM

Yes, you have done well Hoppy! This is a very good poem. Btw, nice to see you around again!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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