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the dark angel
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since 2000-05-10
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0 posted 2000-05-23 07:37 AM

If dreams weren't dreams
and dreams came true
then I wouldn't be stuck here
I'd be there with you.

But no matter
however far we are apart.
Don't ever fear
you are always in my heart

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since 2000-05-23
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1 posted 2000-05-23 10:11 AM

short but sweet.
good work  

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2 posted 2000-05-23 10:15 AM

Nice poem.  This poem applies to me in some ways.

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4 posted 2000-05-23 03:24 PM

Ah, I can relate to this very <b>VERY</b> well. Great job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-23 03:48 PM

Ibolele, my don't give up on that dream....either it will come true or something more beautiful beyond your wildest dreams will come true. Lovely lil poem.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Matchstick McGee
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6 posted 2000-05-23 05:31 PM

I love a well written short poem. It's so easy to carry around with you in your heart. Very well done.


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