|Teen Poetry #2|
|Ment To Be|
since 2000-05-20Posts 13
In your arms I feel so safe
How can I ever live without?
In you, I have so much faith
Were ment to be, there's not doubt
When I lay in bed at night
I can still feel your arms wrapped around me
To my life, you brought a new light
Were ment to be, now do you see?
You'll always have a special place in my heart
I'm so very lucky to have you
I hope that were never apart
Were ment to be, for my life has only began to start
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since 2000-05-23Posts 7
The poem was beautiful.
'When I lay in bed at night
I can still feel your arms wrapped around me'
Just melts my heart because that's how I feel about someone who has now become important in my life...
since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
This is a really sweet poem....a very enjoyable read. Watch for typos though...ment/meant...
Love and hugs,
"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
since 2000-05-10Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
Blondie69...hehe...sorry, maturity returning.
Anyway, great poem. You look like a accomplihed poet and we thinks you'll make an excellant addition to the "Forum".
Spreading insanity, one post at a time
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