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Blondie69 Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 13 |
In your arms I feel so safe How can I ever live without? In you, I have so much faith Were ment to be, there's not doubt When I lay in bed at night I can still feel your arms wrapped around me To my life, you brought a new light Were ment to be, now do you see? You'll always have a special place in my heart I'm so very lucky to have you I hope that were never apart Were ment to be, for my life has only began to start |
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Haroon New Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 7 |
Hello Blondie... The poem was beautiful. That line 'When I lay in bed at night I can still feel your arms wrapped around me' Just melts my heart because that's how I feel about someone who has now become important in my life... Loved it. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a really sweet poem....a very enjoyable read. Watch for typos though...ment/meant... Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Blondie69...hehe...sorry, maturity returning. Anyway, great poem. You look like a accomplihed poet and we thinks you'll make an excellant addition to the "Forum". ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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