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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Dreamy unaprochable mountains overwhelmed your desire Deadly heights regin in your love Moths dance to fragrant silky romances in the night You gracefully fly in torment of the oozing love I'm in heaven taking the halo of pain Moving towards you You smile... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hi, this is very 'visual'..I like poetry that makes me 'see' something or 'feel' something..this certainly did. I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I must agree, this poem sure does create an image for us. It's very nice. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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