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since 2000-05-18
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0 posted 2000-05-21 09:15 PM

I love you so much
I hate being away and feeling alone
I always want to talk to you
But I'm so bad on the phone

I miss the taste of your lips
I long for your sweet smile
I yearn for your embrace,
The way you move, your sweet style

I can't wait till once again
We can be together
For these feelings I have
For you there is no measure

I hope what they say is true
About the time we are apart
They say it will help us
Become fonder in the heart

I lye awake in my bed
In the middle of the night
Anticipating the time when
Once again I can hold you tight
My tears of longing for you I
Find harder and harder to fight

When we are alone together
I want to wrap you in my love
I feel you complete me
You set me free like a dove

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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-22 12:16 PM

nice! sweet words.. for a sweet person? ^_^
well written..


since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
2 posted 2000-05-22 01:14 AM

Wow, i can relate dude...

About a year ago (god, has it really been that long?) i move to Vancouver and left behind a lovely, faithful, sexy, perfect girlfriend... I totally understand where your comming from my friend...  I'd like to tell you it gets better, but the truth is, it dont, only worse...sorry cuz.  Faithful she was, but patience she wasn't, she left me for my best i really blame her...not really, she's happy, he's happy...but will i ever forgive him, not on your life!!!  Oh hell, there i go again, always the pesimist...Well, great poem, it really hit close to home,

latter cuz

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since 2000-05-20
Posts 10

3 posted 2000-05-22 06:45 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. It was well written. I know how hard long distant relationships work but I know that you can get through it. So I think you should turn your upside down   Try to keep in touch and if it doesn't work don't worry beacuse, love will always be in the air. Keep the poems coming


Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 13

4 posted 2000-05-23 06:07 PM

that was a realyl good poem. and i can relate to how you feel. every year i go away for a month and i have to leave my bf here, and the feeling sux.
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-24 03:29 PM

I haven't been in love so I can't say "I can relate".  Anyway, why is everyone so dependant on their boyfriends/girlfriends? What happened to interdependance? Heck, what I am saying...I don't even know what you are going through. Anyway, whatever, I love the poem!

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-24-2000).]

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-05-25 01:16 AM

Welcome to the've expressed the age old truth's painful to be apart from someone you love... please check your email!!  
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7 posted 2000-05-27 08:01 AM

Welcoeme to Passions....this poem is very good I must tell you. It's really sweet to hear of this kind of love. I can't relate either, but if you can feel that way about someone, it must be true love. good luck with that!


 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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